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Q Refer to your P3 Assignment for a reminder of the requirements. Instructions: Post the most recent draft of your P3 essay. It should be a full draft with at least 5 pages. Please return to give feedback to at least one peer for your required peer review, using the criteria below. Leave one comment for each numbered item, the more specific the better. Respond to someone who does not yet have any feedback. An effective argument essay will include: 1. A strong introduction paragraph that draws the reader into your topic, includes the research question, and a thesis claim 2. A thesis claim (see above) that is specific, arguable and provocative, not a question nor merely an opinion 3. Body paragraphs that support the thesis claim of the essay with logical reasoning and evidence 4. Body paragraphs that each develop (only) one key point and start and end with your own words 5. Body paragraphs that start with a topic sentence indicating the point and purpose of that paragraph 6. Evidence that is objective and persuasive and well explained (from personal experience, sources, interviews, etc.) 7. Sources that help to support key points of the essay 8. Integration of sources using ICE – introduce the source, cite for quotes OR paraphrase, explain how it relates to your point 9. A conclusion that reiterates the main argument of the essay Draft: 20 points Peer Review: 10 points

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The breakout of the COVID 19 pandemic has affected people in many ways. One of the major concerns of the pandemic is how it is negatively affecting the mental health of the people? COVID 19 pandemic has put the whole world in front of rising uncertainty. Many people have lost their loved ones because of the virus and many others have lost jobs and have faced a massive economic crisis. Most were on the verge of death and people are not still able to live lives as they used to before the coronavirus outbreak.